Learning about Language名师教学设计2

书面表达: 应用文

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建议信

写作素材（1）：

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。

要点：⑴

参加中文学习班；

⑵

看中文书刊、电视；

⑶

学唱中文歌曲；

⑷

交中国朋友。

注意：词数100词左右。

可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出,但不计入总词数。

第一步：审题

1.

体裁：_______________________________

2.

人称：_______________________________

3.

时态：_______________________________

4.

主题：

______________________________ 第二步：建议信的结构及常用句型：

A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)

1.

After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that

…

2.

I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter 3.

You have asked me for some advice with regard to(关于）

… and I will try to give you some suggestions. 4.

You have asked me for my advice about/on …

B. 建议信第二段常用句式。(提出建议，阐述理由。）

1. Firstly, why not…? If you do this…

Secondly, you should /can …

Thirdly, it would be a good idea if … By doing this, …

At last / Finally/ Last but not least, …

2. I think it would be more beneficial if you could ... 3. I would like to suggest/recommend that... 4. You’ d better…..

5. When it comes to such a situation, I suggest that you should ...

C. 建议信结尾常用句式

1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful /helpful /practical. 2. I believe if you follow my advice, you’ll ......

3. I believe, with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. 适当运用模板：

Dear Li Hua,

I’m sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. In your letter, you said+ 你碰到的问题. My suggestions are as follows/Here are some of my suggestions.

Firstly，I think it would be more beneficial if you could

____________, because ____________. Secondly, you should________________, because_________________. Thirdly, you’d better ___________________.Only in this way can you __________.

I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.

Best wishes.

Yours,

xxx

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

LiHua