Learning about Languageppt配套的教学设计方案

短文改错方法指导

StepⅠ课前思考：

1. What’s the main trouble when correcting a composition?

2. Do you find any rules about how to correct? What are they? StepⅡ课中探究

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口诀：______词形

1. Practice: 1) (四川卷) … When he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, …

2) (2010新课标全国) … You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out…

3) (2011新课标全国) … Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish. …

2. Conclusion:

主要包括两类错误：动词的______和_______错误，以及________不一致的错误。

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口诀：_______词数

1. Practice: 1) (2011辽宁)… , I found most lesson rather uninteresting. …

2) (2011新课标全国) … It felt very strange to travel without luggages. …

2. Conclusion:

名词__________形式的用法错误。

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口诀：还要注意_______和_________ 1. Practice: 1) (2014全国Ⅰ)a.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!

(2011新课标全国) b...., I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. 2) (2011辽宁) …We can hear birds singing happy all around.

3) (2011浙江) …Unfortunate，there are too many people in my family. …

4)（2013年四川卷）…The two men threw all their equipment into the water to make the balloon light. …

2. Conclusions: 1）修饰______，系动词要用形容词

2）修饰________，形容词，整个_________用副词

3）考查______级和_______级的使用

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口诀：________语，细辨别

1. Practice: 1）（2013浙江高考卷）…Li Meng came see me last year.

2）（2013年全国高考卷大纲卷）…He isn’t good at talk but he gets on well with other people. 3）（2013年四川卷）

… ,he suddenly heard his name calling.

2. Conclusion: 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有__________、过去分词，动名词和________错误。

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口诀：________格，细领悟

1. Practice: 1) (2013全国课标卷）… Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed! …

2) (2012浙江高考题）… I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievement(成就) . …

2. Conclusion: _____ 词的主格和宾格，名词性物主代词，_______性物主代词或_______代词的误用. 六

口诀：______词、_______词常光顾

1. Practice: 1) (2010全国II) …My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there. …

2) (2012四川卷) …An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farms. …

2. Conclusion: 常考的错误形式有_____词but，

and，

or和so的用法错误，以及_____词的用法错误等。

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口诀：______________要记住

1. Practice: ①

…catch a sight of ②

…in a short ③

…in hurry

④

…in Sunday afternoon ⑤

…such many people

2. Conclusion: 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：_____词、_______词和_________错误。

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口诀：___________成分多分析

1. Practice:

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1) (安徽卷) …The United States is composed of fifty states, two of those are separated from the others by land or water. …

2) (2012新课标全国卷) …But before long they begin to see which was happening. …

2. Conclusion:

不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子________和__________作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。

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口诀：__________错误须关注

1. Practice: 1) (2010安徽) … She looked at it and started to laugh, “How are you laughing?” I asked.

“Because they’re dog biscuits!” she said. …

2) (2013陕西高考卷）…I want to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. 2. Conclusion:

与句子的_________文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误。

StepⅢ

总结：短文改错口诀

______词形，

_______词数; 还要注意_______和______。

________语，细辨别; ________格，细领悟。

______词、_______词常光顾；

______________要记住; ___________成分多分析；

__________错误须关注。

StepⅣ

课堂练习

1．（2006）

At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one.It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burn in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.

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2. It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8,2007.I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street.Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park

Road. The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn’t

stop and drive off at full speed heading west．I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864．

After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. StepⅤ

假如你是一名老师，请你把下面这篇正确的文章设计成一篇短文改错。

Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk about what you should do when a fire alarm goes off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait for your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmates. Don’t panic or get out of line, and try to remain quiet and calm . Soon the firefighters will come and put out the fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead you back to the classroom. If you notice that someone is missing or hurt, tell your teacher immediately.

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（2009辽宁）When I was in high school , most of my friend had bicycles，I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle ,that was only one hundred yuan . I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty . You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle. 3.（2014新课标1）Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and Ihad been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost! 4．（2014陕西）My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured. That day I didn’t

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learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity! 5．（2014四川）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately. 6．（2014浙江）

I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success. No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.

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