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Teaching plan

Writing: How to write a composition step by step? Teaching time: The 16th Week Teaching content How to write a composition step by step (take “a

letter of invitation” as an example)

The analysis of the students

Writing is very important in English. Although students used to write this kind of articles many times in examination, they still can’t get higher scores, because most of students didn’t master the basic skills and methods

of writing. What’s more, the letter of invitation has always been the hotpots in College Entrance Examination for many years, thus, I think it’s high time that students should be improved by thematic training.This period aims at helping students have a basic understanding of the form, structure, tense and some writing tips of a letter.

The analysis of teaching material

There are many types of letters in Writing, and the letter of invitation is most important in recent ten years in College Entrance Examination. So,it is very necessary for students to master it well. Teaching goals

Knowledge goals: 1.Learn how to write a composition about a letter of invitation

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2.Learn how to use advanced phrases and sentence patterns in their English composition. Ability goals:

To make students have some basic skills of writing. Emotion goals:

1.To get rid of being afraid of English composition. 2. Ss’

will be more interested in English learning while sharing their ideas with others. Teaching Aims After this lesson, students will be able to know how to write a letter of invitation step by step . Teaching important points

Enable Ss to know how to write a composition about a letter of invitation. Teaching difficult points

Enable Ss to know how to use the key words to make sentences and use some advanced sentences to complete a coherent composition.

Teaching methods

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Task

2.Cooperation

3.Discussion

4.Analyzing Teaching Aids

Multi-media facilities and a blackboard Teaching Procedures:

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Step

1. Lead in 1.Show some students’ exam papers to let students compare these samples, then decide which one will get higher scores in their first impression, and lead in the topic.

2. Analyzing what make a good composition? Four

elements: Content\ Language\ Structure\ Beauty Step 2:Introduction of the basic elements Four steps to write a composition:

① Analyzing the writing topic 审题

②Make an outline拟提纲--- (list the key words) ③Translation（翻译）---(Thinking of key points/phrases) ④Forming passage by adding some linking words.（成文）

Step 3. Presentation Present the writing materials to the class, then ask them to do some imagination, and try to enrich the content. How to write a letter of invitation ? 书面表达：

假设你是李华，我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在德江二中就读的你的朋友Linda写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起参加。内容包括：

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1.介绍比赛的相关内容；2.说明你打算参加的原因；

3.询问对方的意向。

Show a sample letter to students, and then ask students do several tasks according to the following steps: 1)

Sentence structure:

How many parts does “a letter of invitation” contain? What are they?(the beginning,the body,and the ending）

2) Sentence patterns: What sentence structures can we use to write part ? 1: intention And part 3: expectation\gratitude. Some useful sentence patterns will be shown on the screen. 3). The step of writing a letter of invitation Part 1 : 说明事由，发出邀请（夺人眼球开头句）

1.I’m more than delighted to inform you that _____________________. 2.Knowing /Informed of the exciting news that________________, I can’t wait to invite you to participate in it.

Part 2 : 介绍活动，讲述原因（出彩中篇句）

the activity will be held ____________(时间，地点，安排等）。The reasons why I intend to take part in the competition are as follows. To begin with, ______________________(reason1）. Furthermore/In addition，______________(reason 2）. Last but not least, ________________（reason 3）. If you are interested, please _________(报名方式）. The deadline is ________（截止日期）.

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Part 3 :

作总结，期待回复或参与（韵味无穷结尾句）

1. Your participation will surely make the activity fruitful and meaningful. I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.

2. It would be highly appreciated if you could accept my invitation. I’m sure it can leave an everlasting impression on you! I’m looking forward to your reply. Step 4 Practice: Write a letter of invitation

(Discussing the composition). Divide students into 8 groups and then ask some of them to show their works. Each two groups write part 1and part 2,the rest four groups write the part two( body part ) , Step 5. Forming a coherent composition 1.Pick up five of their good sentences to make a complete composition, then show to the whole class . (Request students try to use advanced words、phrases and various sentence patterns to polish their passage.)

2.Ask students to add some linking words to form the whole essay to make it easy to understand. Step 6 .Conclusion

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What did we learn today? Summarize what make a good composition and how to write it step by step. Suggestions:Three keys to improving your composition A. learn to use advanced phrases.

B. learn to use abundant sentences.

C. learn to use suitable linking words. Step 7 Homework （2019年英语作文全国卷三）

假设你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen 参加，内容包括：

1.时间

2.活动安排

3.欢迎他表演节目。

（注意：词数100左右。可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯。）

此篇邀请信模板

Dear Henry,

I’m more than delighted to write to invite you to participate in a_____________(主题）

, for, as I know, you are very crazy about_______________ , especially_______________（兴趣爱好）. The___________________will be held ____________________(时间）

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in___________________(地点）.To start with, a variety of activities, such as _______________which is your speciality ,will be on show. Many famous music stars who are from different countries will get together. What’s more significant is that____________(名人）will be here to perform with a volunteer to sing together to show their friendship to audience. What you impressed me deeply is that you have talent for music, thus, I________________________（我强烈推荐和热烈欢迎）that you can join and perform this activity actively. I believe you can learn more form it.

I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I’m sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you and everlasting memory in your whole life ! I’m looking forward to your earliest reply. Step 8. The design of the blackboard

How to write an essay step by step? Writing Procedures :four steps ①

Analyzing the writing topic ②Make an outline Language ③Translation

④Forming a passage

Beauty

A good essay: Content Structure

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