Learning about Language教学设计及说课稿

4.

many thanks for …

5.

express my thanks/gratitude for …

6.

owe sb. a lot for …

7.

be indebted to sb. for …

8.

盛情款待：照料

care Thanks for your hospitality

We appreciate your hospitality

We thank you for your hospitality ②常用句式：细述并赞赏对方给予的帮助

1. If it had not been for you assistance in______(对方给你的具体帮助), I would have been(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).

2. It was your kind help that...(强调句型) 再次表达谢意并阐述回报愿望

1.

Thanks again for your generous help. 2.

I appreciate it more than I can say. 3.

Please do allow me to return your favor(报答) 4.

Best wishes for your health and every happiness.

探究案一

使用亮点词汇的4种方法

1．“语”众不同

写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。

①I'm busy with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near.

→I'm

my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which

is

to me, is around the corner.(2017·天津高考书面表达) ②So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter. →

, I

by correcting my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达) 2．更新换代，避免重复

写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。

①The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches. →The team will hold

activities, some of which will appeal to you, including many matches.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达) ②We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also built a library where the old playground used to be.

→We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also

a library where the old playground used to be. 3．单词与短语巧妙互用

一般情况下短语优先，应多使用短语、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。

①I've decided to teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours. →I've

teach you Tang Poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 am on Wednesday, which will last two hours.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达) ②We can look at this problem in many ways. →We can

this problem in many ways.(view比look at更有“内涵”)

4．用高年级学到的词汇代替低年级学到的词汇

为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应避免反复使用初中或小学阶段学过的词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。

①I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. →I

for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon.(2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达) ②Second, I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position. →Second, I am

to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.

(2017·天津高考书面表达) 探究案二

Ⅰ.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的划线部分。

1．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达) So, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you prepare for your class.

_______________________

2．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)In order to get a better understanding of Tang Poetry, I advise you to learn some brief history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.

_______________________ 3．(2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapes on the spot. ____________________ 4．(2016·北京高考书面表达)Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials. ___________________ 5．(2016·四川高考书面表达)The reasons are the following. __________________ 6．(2015·湖南高考书面表达)At the same time, I decided to study harder rather than waste precious time on those useless things ...

_____________________

7．As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school. _____________ 8．There's no harm in your staying up late sometimes. ___________________

训练案

思维导图：

1.开篇表示_________

感谢信要点结构图

3.对方给予的具体帮助；没有

对方帮助会产生的

_________

2.感谢的___________

4.再次表示

；向对方表示祝愿。

写作模板：

Dear_________,

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for_________(感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in___For one thing...For another...(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been______(没有对方帮助会产生的后果).

Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.（再次表示感谢）

Hoping to hear from you soon.（表达希望）

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua 重点词汇：1.extend 表达

2.sincere 真诚的

3.gratitude 感谢

4.assistance 帮助

5.fear/afraid 害怕，担心

6.agree 同意，赞同

7.express 表达

8.accept 接受

检测案

历年真题

假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr. Brown的资助，可以重返校园。你给Mr. Brown写了一封信，内容如下：

★

收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；

★

在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励；

★

决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；

★

盼望见到Mr. Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。

注意：1. 书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数：100左右。

Dear Mr. Brown，

I am writing

the money and books you sent me. I

to school without your help. Thank you so much.

I

hard since I

back to school. I

great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers. They often praise me and encourage me.

your help, I

school and

such a good education. I

up my mind to study harder and make

progress.

How are you

your life and work?I would like to meet you

, but I have no opportunity to do so. Would you please send me a photo of yourself? Thank you again for your

help and best wishes!

Yours Sincerely, Li Hua

当堂检测

Translate the following sentences with three kinds of levels.. 1. 如果没有您的帮助我不可能回到学校。

L Level ________________________________________________________________________ M Level _______________________________________________________________________ H Level ________________________________________________________________________ 2. 要不是您的帮助我可能已经离开学校了。

L Level ________________________________________________________________________ M Level _______________________________________________________________________ H Level ________________________________________________________________________ 3．(2016·四川高考书面表达)The reasons are the following. __________________ Homework 假如你是李华，最近参加一期“英国夏令营”活动，共两周时间。你住在Johnson夫妇家中，他们为你提供了吃、住、行及旅行方面的帮助。请写信感谢他们。内容要点：

1.感谢Johnson夫妇；

2.你的感受；

3.邀请Johnson夫妇来华旅游。

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