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高二英语作文导学案

5：How to write a letter of asking for help 1.

Read the sample of a letter of application.

【2011全国卷

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假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(learning center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需要书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：

1. 本人简介；

2.

求助内容；

3.

约定时间；

4.

你的联系方式(Email:lihua@1236.com; Phone:12345678) 要求：词数约100

审题

1.

在英国学习，遇到什么困难？

2.

有礼貌地陈述希望得到辅导中心的帮助

3.

如何书面预约？

范文

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help.

I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the learning center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address lihua@1236.com

and phone number: 12345678.

I would be very grateful if you could arrange my appointment. Looking

forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

2. 求助信包括的内容

1) 开头的问候语或者自我介绍。

2) 求助内容的拓展（提出的问题数量不能过多，考虑合理性）。

3) 希望对方回复并表示感谢。

3. 注意事项

1) 求助信语气要委婉、真诚，并能清晰陈述请求的内容。

2) 根据题目要求提供足够的信息（适当拓展）。

4. Sentence patterns.

1)

开头问候语

How is everything going? Hope everything is fine with you there. Is everything going well with you?

2)

求助的常用句型

I am writing to ask you for help. I wonder if you could do me a favor. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. I would be very grateful if you could…

I’m anxious to get help.

3) 遇到的困难

Now I am faced with some new learning problems.

I have some difficulty in wth/doing sth. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I find it difficult to do sth.

4. Exercise:

A. Translate the Chinese into English:

1) 我写信想请你帮个忙。

_______________________________________________________________________

2) 我想知道你是否能帮帮我。

_____________________________________________________________________

3) 首先，我太担心分数以至于我不能集中注意力在学习上。

_________________________________________________________________

4) 我发现背单词很困难。

_______________________________________________________________________

5）面对以上的问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给我一些关于如何写好英语作文的建议吗？

_______________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________ 6）我有信心在你的帮助下，我能战胜害怕开口说英语的恐惧。

_______________________________________________________________________

5. Try to write a letter of asking for help: 练习

1 【2016年全国课标

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假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

注意：1. 词数100左右

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

写作提示：

1.

信件开头（是问候语还是自我介绍）

___________________________________________________________________ 2.

背景介绍

___________________________________________________________________ 3.

求助的内容是什么？（用自己的语言组织）

中文：_____________________________________________________________ 英文：_____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 4. 表示感谢

___________________________________________________________________ 5. 思考：拓展的内容是什么？放在哪里？

___________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________

6. 然后把以上句子连成一篇完整的信件。

Dear Ms Jenkins,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours truly,

Li Hua

练习

2 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：

1.

询问Tom的生活和学习情况；

2.

谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；

3.

告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。

___________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Tom,

It’s been a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything going with you? I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile, I find it hard to use English properly. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. I can’t wait to see you again.

yours,

Li Hua 假设你是李华，初到英国留学遇到一些困难，因此写信给你的朋友王平，述说你的困难并寻求帮助。

1.

语言方面的障碍；

2. 饮食的不习惯

3. 想家，孤独；

4. 寻求帮助。

（词数约100）

Dear Wang Ping,

How time flies! We have not kept in touch with each other for several months. I miss you very much. Now I am studying in UK. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I’m one of your students, Li Hua from Class Two. I’m writing to ask for your help.

This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company, through which I would like to broaden my horizons, gain some working experience and meet new friends. My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them. Firstly, I’m wondering if you can help add some contents. Besides, if there are some mistakes in them, I hope you can help correct them. Lastly, I attach some materials whose

format had better be changed and hope you can help.

I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hua