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广东番禺中学2017高一写作学案--- 感谢信

主备人：陈锐英

感谢信一般分为三部分：

第一段: 写出写信目的. (表达感谢)

第二段: 阐述感谢的原因.

第三段:再次表达感谢,并可表述希望有机会可以给对方回报.

相关单词、短语

considerate 体谅的

generous慷慨的

grateful 感激的

encouragement鼓励

appreciate 感激v. 1.

have a great influence in my life对我人生中有很大影响

2.

express my thanks/gratitude to sb. for sth. 感谢某人某事

3.

thank sb. for (doing) sth.

感谢某人(做了)某事

be grateful to sb. for sth. 感谢某人某事

4.

the turning point of my life我人生的转折点

5 .

make great progress不断进步

6.

thanks to your encouragement多亏你的鼓励

7.

make up my mind to study hard下决心努力学习

相关句式

1. 我写信是要感谢你归还我的钱包和手机。

I’m writing to thank you for returning to me my wallet and mobile phone. 2. 我写信的目的是感谢你为养育我所付出的巨大努力。

I’m writing to express my thanks to you for your great efforts to bring me up. 3. 我写信是要感谢你帮助我学英语。

I’m writing to show my gratitude for your help with my English. 4. 非常感谢你的鼓励, 我写信就是要告诉你,我在数学方面取得了巨大进步。

I’m grateful to you for your encouragement

and I’m writing to tell you that I have made great progress in maths.

5. 由于有了你的帮助, 我克服了困难, 在这次比赛中得了第一名。

Thanks to your help, I overcame the difficulty and came first in the competition. 6. 如果不是有你的帮助, 这次实验我就不会成功。

If it were not for your help, I would not have succeeded in the experiment. 7. 你热心助人, 请再次接受我真诚的感谢。

You are so helpful and warm-hearted, and please accept my sincere thanks again.

8. 非常感谢你的支持。

Your support is greatly appreciated.

9. 使我高兴的是, 你非常乐于助人, 给我提建议, 助我解决问题。

To my delight，you were so helpful that you gave me advice and helped me solve the problem.

写作模板

Dear.., I am writing to convey my gratitude /express my thanks to you for all you did for me. If it had not been for your assistance, I’m afraid that I would have been…

…

Thank you again and I hope that I will have the opportunity to repay your kindness. Yours sincerely,

Li Hua,' 课堂练习

假设你是李华, 昨天下午参加了英语才艺大赛(Talent Show), 并获得一等奖。以下是参加情况及获奖感受：

1. 看别人比赛时：紧张；

2. 自己表演时：想起Mike数月的努力与帮助, 冷静；

3. 在最有挑战的问答环节：谨记Mike的建议, 顺利；

4. 宣布结果时：兴奋, 遗憾Mike不在场。

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实战演练

假如你是上海的李华，在云南旅游时，

你得到了朋友Mary的热情帮助，请写一封感谢信给她。信中应包括以下内容：

1. 告知她你已经安全抵家

2. 回忆她在云南为你提供的帮助

3. 感谢她的热心招待(hospitality)

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课堂练习

Dear Mike，

I’m writing to tell you that I won first prize in the English Talent Show yesterday afternoon. Before it was my turn I watched the others and got very nervous. But when I was on the stage, I thought of all your efforts to help me during the past few months and gradually

calmed down.

Although the question-and-answer section was the most challenging part，

I got through it quite smoothly by remembering all your suggestions. When the judge announced the result I was very excited, but it was really a pity that you were not there. Please accept my warmest thanks. I look forward to your return to China.

Yours，

Li Hua

实战演练

Dear Mary, After a pleasant night, I have arrived home safely this morning. This journey in Yunnan proves the most memorable one, which should be owed to your hospitality. It surprised me when I saw you at the airport of Kunming. In fact, you could have only needed to tell me your address, but you took half a day off just to pick me up. During the next three days you continued to move me with all your hospitality. Every morning when I got up, I saw the breakfast you prepared for me before you left home to work. It's very kind of you, and I am really grateful. I do not know how to express my deep gratitude to you. I really look forward to your trip to Shanghai next year, which will allow me a chance to entertain you as a good friend. Yours sincerely, Li Hua

参考文章(感谢老师) Dear sir, I am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning English. You are one of the best teachers who I have ever met. There are many good points that I learn from you. During these days in your class, I have acquired much knowledge from you and it really helps me a lot. Firstly, you let me know what the west thinking pattern is —straight thinking pattern. As an English learner, it is important for me to understand the difference between them. There is no denying the fact that this can help me with my examination and interaction with foreigners. What’s more, I’m glad to be your student, and I am very happy to learn the course under your guidance. English is an important tool, through which we can share our experience with the world. I value the chance of learning English, and I enjoy the happiness from your course. The last but not the least, please forgive those mistakes I have made which may upset you. What I have learned from you will help me pass the coming examinations and also be useful for my further education abroad. It is not only a progress of learning, but also an improvement of my ability. May everything go well around you. Your student,

Li Hua