Learning about Language教学设计第二课时

高考英语书面表达分类汇编

话题写作

读书爱书捐书

智能时代，越来越多人低头与手机电脑，读书成为了奢侈品，提倡全民读书呼声随之而来，学生更应该多读书读好书！

读书活动

红星中学拟于本周五上午8：00在阅览室举行英语读书会（reading circle）活动．假设你是高三学生李华，请给你的外教Mr．Black写一封邮件，邀请他参加活动．邮件的内容包括：

（1）介绍读书活动的相关信息；

（2）说明你发出邀请的原因；

（3）询问对方的意向．

注意：（1）词数不少于100词；

（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

Dear Mr．Black，

I hope that everything goes on well with you．____________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ --Yours sincerely，

Li Hua．

答案及解析：

Dear Mr．Black，

I hope that everything goes on well with you．I'm writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school．（高分句型一）We'll feel honored if you are present．

The activity is scheduled at 8：00 a．m．this Friday in the reading﹣room．Aiming to improve the students' understanding of the beauty of foreign literature，the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face，sharing their own reading experience together．As we consider （高分句型二）that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some 1

valuable suggestions on English reading，we sincerely hope that you can come to join us．（高分句型三）

Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us？Thank you in advance．Hope to hear from you soon．

Yours

Hua 提纲类．这是一封邀请信，要求考生根据题目所列出的信息给外教Mr．Black写一封邀请函，阐明邀请他参加活动的具体内容和信息，并且阐明原因．考生在进行写作的时候，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性．

高分句型一：I'm writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school．句中to be held in our school作后置定语

高分句型二：Aiming to improve the students' understanding of the beauty of foreign literature，the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face，sharing their own reading experience together．句中Aiming to improve the students' understanding of the beauty of foreign literature和sharing their own reading experience together均是属于现在分词作状语

书香校园

假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack对你们学校最近开展的"书香校园"活动很感兴趣．请你用英语给他写一封信，内容包括：

1．"书香校园"活动开展的情况；

2．你对该活动的看法．

注意：1．词数100字左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

书香校园：Scholarly Campus Dear Jack，

I'm glad that you are interested in the Scholarly Campus activity in our school．

_____________________________________________________________________2

_________________________________________________________________________________________ Wish you all the best! Yours，

Li Hua 答案及解析：

Dear Jack，

I'm glad that you are interested in the Scholarly Campus activity in our school．I'm eager to tell you something about it．

Recently our school has held the Scholarly Campus activity with the aim of encouraging us students to read more books．（高分句型一）We have conducted several activities，such as holding class meetings about books，opening reading clubs，sharing reading experiences and so on．（高分句型二）Now the concept of Scholarly Campus is so well﹣received that you can find students read books all over the campus．（高分句型三）

As for me，I'm more than happy to join in the activity．Not only does it arouse students'interest in reading，but it also cultivates students'love for knowledge and，more importantly，for life．I'm sure it will bring benefits for students．

Wish you all the best! Yours，

Li Hua

本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息针对英国朋友Jack对你们学校最近开展的"书香校园"活动很感兴趣．请你用英语给他写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点："书香校园"活动开展的情况；你对该活动的看法．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子4．的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．

3

本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be eager to渴望去做；with the aim of 有…的目的；As for 至于，more than非常；not only，but also不仅，关于；而且；

Recently our school has held the Scholarly Campus activity with the aim of encouraging us students to read more books．（高分句型一）

We have conducted several activities，such as holding class meetings about books，opening reading clubs，sharing reading experiences and so on．（高分句型二）

Now the concept of Scholarly Campus is so well﹣received that you can find students read books all over the campus．（高分句型三）

读书月

假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校学生会准备举行一次“读书月(Reading Month)”活动。请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一则书面通知，并号召大家积极参与。

1. 目的：丰富校园生活，开阔视野，提髙阅读水平；

2. 内容：每人至少读三本书，并写一篇读后感(impressions of after-reading)，于四月三十日前交给学生会；

3. 时间：三月六日至四月五日。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 通知的开头已拟好，不计入总词数。

Dear fellow students, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案及解析：

Dear fellow students,

In order to enrich our school life, we are going to hold an event called “Reading Month”. The event is aimed at broadening our horizons and improving our reading ability. Everyone is encouraged to take an active part. The details of the arrangement are as follows. The event will last from March 6th to April 5th, during which every participant is required to read at least three books of any kind. Besides, impressions of after-reading are welcome and should be submitted to Students’ Union before the last day of the event.

This event is of great benefit to students. We call on every one of you to join us. Let’s enjoy ourselves in the ocean of books. Yours, Li Hua

4

倡议捐书

假设你是高三学生李华，请你写一封倡议书，号召同学们在高考结束后捐出旧书，送给需要的同学。

内容包括：

1.捐书的种类：参考书、课本等；

2.捐书的意义。

【答案解析】

One Possible Version Dear fellow students, Soon we are going to bid farewell to middle school and become freshmen in universities. How to deal with loads of used reference books? I urge that after the national entrance examination, we collect the books and donate them to those who need them. In doing so, we can not only bring warmth to those in need, but also give the second hand books a new life, which is far more environment-friendly than throwing them into the dustbins. Let’s act hand in hand!

Li Hua

图书捐赠

假如你是育才中学的学生会主席李华。上周美国亚特兰大ELCA高中（Eagle’s

Landing Christian Academy）学生会到你校开展友好访问，向你校图书馆捐赠了一批图书，请你给ELCA高中的学生会主席Peter写一封信，要点如下：

1. 感谢对方捐赠图书；

2. 希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动；

3. 通过EMS寄去由同学们亲手编织的中国结。

注意：1. 词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。

2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案解析】

Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua, President of the Student Union of Yucai High School. On behalf of my school, I am writing to express our sincere thanks to you. It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which we believe are very informative and helpful to our students. In return, by EMS we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which symbolize unity and luck in China. They are hand-made by our students, in which we want to send our purest wishes to you. Please note to check and hope you like them. In the future, I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation.

Thank you again for the books you generously donated. Looking forward to your next visit.

Yours, Li Hua

5

校园书市

假如你是李华，你校即将举行一年一度的“校园书市

（a campus book fair）”活动，其目的是给同学们提供一个交换、利用图书的机会。请你用英语写信给你的加拿大笔友Mike, 介绍此次活动的有关情况。内容应括：

1. 活动目的；

2. 活动内容：买书，卖书，交换图书;

3. 活动意义。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

How are you doing these days?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

答案及解析：

Dear Mike,

How are you doing these days?

Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books, the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school. The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school, who are to sell, purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers.

As a regular visitor, I’ve found myself increasingly drawn by the fair. For one 6

thing, the fair exhibits books of hundreds of types on diverse topics, motivating us to further develop our reading habits and help to broaden our horizons. For another, most books are sold at a lower price than what the bookstores offer.

Please let me know if you have any suggestions on how to host such a book fair better.

Yours,

Li Hua

试题分析：本文属于提纲作文，考生首先要看清楚要求，然后再根据要求详细讨论。本文的话题是给网友写一封信，为他介绍你校的一次活动，属于书信类作文，所以使用一般将来时和一般现在时的时态。在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语aim at以……为目标；make use of利用；motivate sb. to do sth.激励某人做某事；broaden our horizons开拓视野；for one thing, for another一方面，另一方面。还有非谓语Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make use of their books, the annual campus book fair will soon be held in our school. 以及由who引导的定语从句The fair will attract a huge crowd from the entire school, who are to sell, purchase and exchange their second-hand books with their peers。

读书节

假定你是李华，

你校每年都有一次读书节，你想邀请在本市工作的英国朋友大卫参加今年的读书节，请你就此写一封邀请信，主要内容包括：

1.

起始时间和地点；

2.

活动：免费赠书和讲座。

3.

目的：鼓励学生。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结语以为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear David, I’d like to invite you to join the annual Reading Festival of our school next 7

Sunday.

Yours, Li Hua 答案及解析：

5. Dear David, I’d like to invite you to join the annual Reading Festival of our school next Sunday. To inspire more people to love reading and know the benefits of reading, our school has decided to give away books for free in the lecture hall. After that, a lecture on the effective ways of reading will be given there. The Reading Festival this year will begin at 8 am and end at 11 am. Anyone fond of reading is welcome to come and celebrate the Reading Festival with us. I’d appreciate it if you could come to our school on time. I’m looking forward to you arrival!

Yours, Li Hua

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语give away赠送；be fond of 喜爱；look forward to 盼望着；To inspire more people to love reading and know the benefits of reading, our school has decided to give away books for free in the lecture hall这个句子To inspire more people to love reading and know the benefits of reading运用到不定式做目的状语；I’d appreciate it if you could come to our school on time这个句子8

it做形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面if引导的从句；

阅读经典好书

你是李华，美籍交换生Lucy在邮件中说对你校流行的"阅读经典好书"（Read classic books)活动十分感兴趣，请你回封邮件详细地介绍此活动。内容包括：

1.阐述阅读经典好书的意义；

2.列举阅读活动安排；

3.期待她的参与。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Lucy, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 答案及解析：

Dear Lucy,

I’m glad that you have an interest in our recent reading activity called “Read classic books”. As we all know, reading classic books is popular and important because it can improve our studying career and enrich our everyday life.

There are some arrangements every week in our school. First, we have an event on Monday where one of us is going to share a classic book and talk about it in detail. We also have a book salon on Wednesday where we could exchange our views. Beside, every Saturday afternoon, we will gather in a coffee shop to relax and select our best author and talk about his or her life and works.

I’m sure you can gain a lot from the reading activity. Please come and join us soon. 9

Yours, Li Hua 本题考查提纲类作文。首先审题，假定你是李华，美籍交换生Lisa在邮件中说对你校流行的“阅读经典好书’’(read classic books)活动很感兴趣。请你回封邮件详1.阐述阅读经典好书的意义。2.列举阅读活动安排。细地介绍此活动。内容包括：3.期待她的参与。其次要确定时态，用一般现在时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如I am glad to receive your e-mail, in which you told me that what interests you is the popular activity “Reading Classic Book” in our school.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。这篇短文使用了一些高级短语，为文章增色不少。例如：例如：be aware of知道，be eager to渴望。

10