Using LanguageⅡ公开课教案

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Friendship is very importance. Everyone need friendship. In our all lives we can`t live without friendship just as we can`t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kinds of difficulties in the front of us. But real friendship is no easy to come by. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. By his advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves. Mr.Smith bought the house near a school. He spend the first week there in peace. Then came a new school year. Every afternoon after school several boy came to play the football behind his house. They made too much noise that Mr.Smith couldn’t stand it. He decided take some steps.One afternoon,he stopped the boys and gave themselves each a dollar .He said they brought him a lot of funs. He also promised to give them money every day if they played football there, that made the children very happy. A week later,Mr.Smith told them he had no money.The boys became angry but didn’t play football there any more.

I ever worked as a tour guide. One day ,I saw advertisement in the newspaper. I rang up the company, and I was given the job immediate. They asked me take a tour around the city the next morning. The manager just told me to say anything which I could think of about the city. My first tour is terrible. The old bus was not air-conditioned, or it was the middle of summer. It was comfortable inside the bus. The tourist soon became very hot and angry. I had a very hardly time. I stayed there for a few weeks, and then left and joined in a better company.

Dear Tim, How time flies! It has been a month since you go to America. What is everything going? Next weekend I will take part in a national English speaking competition to be holding in Shanghai. It will be a good chance to improve your English and make friends with students from other part of China. But right now I’m not sure that I can remember all the words for a competition. Anyway, I will hope I can get a good result. I am looking forward seeing you again and hope we can have a true great time then.

Last summer vacation, I went on a school trip with mine classmates. We visited a farm in a countryside. We took a bus for a while, and then we walked here. We saw a lot of different kinds trees and villages along the way. Some farmers were worked hard in the farm when we arrived. One of the farmer showed us around, introducing differently crops to us. We fed chickens, picked some green apples and took up many beautiful photos. It was really interesting and at the same time, I learned a lot about farming. What an excited school trip!

The winter holiday is drawing near, that makes me excited. I had been looking forward to relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I also expect to play the basketball with my classmates. It will surely be a wonderful time! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. In additional, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade him.