Learning about Language优质课教案内容

Strategies for

Effective Expansion of Writing ---书面表达之有效拓展

1. Thinking :What’s wrong with these two composition below?

Too much in Para1!irrelevant details无效拓展

Summary: 书面表达拓展常见的问题: 1. 喧宾夺主(distracting)

2. 与主题偏离(irrelevant)

3. 句式贫乏(unvaried)

2. Thinking:What can we learn from the following sample?(2017广西卷) Dear Eric,

I'm very glad to tell you that my school ping-pong team is recruiting new members. Since you are always crazy about the sport, I'd like to invite you to join us. Now, here are some details for you.

The team will hold a wide range of activities. Team members need to receive training after school every day, because enough practice contributes to our progress. In addition, we often invite professional coaches to instruct us, aiming to promote our skills. Above all, we’ll compete in some formal competitions with other schools’ teams, in which you can make many friends.

If you are interested in it, you are expected to call me or send your email to the 1234567@qq.com. Besides, the deadline is June10th.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Summary: 书面表达拓展注意事项

1. 紧紧围绕要点进行拓展；

2. 并非每个要点都拓展；

3. 适当拓展细节：

※a. cause

(as, because, since, for…) ※b. result (so, as a result) ※c. aim (to….; aim to…; in order to) ※d. meaning (which; not only…but also…) ※e. example (such as; for example) 3. 学以致用：拓展下列的句子

1) Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow

morning .

…, as she has something important to attend to.

2）I can speak fluent English.

Since I've been learning English for 10 years, …

…

so that I can communicate with foreign people freely.

3）In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise.

…, such as swimming, running and various ball games.

4）An English evening was held in our school on the evening of Jan.10th, 2015.

Aiming to arouse our interest in English, …

5）We have made up our minds to study harder than before to learn every subject well.

…

in order to be admitted to key universities in the future.

6）On my holidays, I will travel around the world.

…, which will not only broaden my horizons but also make my life much richer and more colorful.

4. 情境演练（拓展每个要点）

Situation A : (要点：1. 与同学，老师交流；2. 课后锻炼等) I’m so sorry to hear that and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. Here are my suggestions.

I suggest you communicate with your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them.

You should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your confidence.

I advise you to do some exercise in your spare time, such as playing basketball, running, swimming.

Listening to classic music is also advised so that you can sleep better at night.

Situation B.（1. 包饺子

2. 表演节目等）

We will hold various activities in the nursing home.

We will make dumplings with them, aiming to keep the elderly people company.

Besides, we will also spend some fun time together giving performances and chatting with them, which enables the elderly people to forget loneliness and feel warm in the heart.