Using LanguageⅡ优秀课堂实录

Unit3Australia-writing

教学设计

白晓军

Teaching Aims:

Knowledge aims:to learn the techniques to write an email.

Teaching procedure:to learn the techniques and finish tasks.

Emotional aims:to learn to communicate with others through emails.

Teaching important and difficult points: 1. The basic form of an email. 2. Advanced structures.

Teaching methods: 1.Task-based method. 2.Interactive and cooperative learning. Teaching Aids:

A computer and the multimedia.

Teaching procedures: Step1.

Lead –in (1)Show some pictures of Australia. (2)Get someone to read the email. Step2. Show them the basic form of an email.

1.Show a picture of a person to the students 2.Teacher:how many parts can we divide a person into?

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3.Show them the basic form of an email, some frequently-used initial parts and endings. Salutation Body Ending and signature 1.开头语：

1) 常用开头语

a. How are you getting on recently? b. Many thanks for your last letter. c. I am glad to know that…

d. I’m sorry to hear that…

2. 结尾语

1) 常用结尾语有：

a. Good luck to you !

b. Please give my best wishes to …

c. Wish you good health and remember me to…! 2) 采用分词短语: 句末多用逗号。

a. Waiting for your good news, b. Looking forward to your early reply /hearing

from you, c. Hoping to hear from you soon,

3) 采用介词短语，句末多用逗号。

a. With best regards,

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b. With kind regards to your family, c. With best wishes to you and yours, 4) 采用完整句子, 句末用句号。

a. We are waiting for your good news. b. I hope to receive your early reply. c. We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience Step3 Advanced structures(get them to finish the relative tasks) ◆

It句型

It will be + some time + before…

用不了多久人类就会去火星

It won’t be long before humans visit the Mars

②

It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth. 学好英语对我们很重要

It is very important for us to learn English well.

③

It is + 被强调部分

+ that…

what Yang Liwei has done

encourages us a lot.→

It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot. ◆

名词从句

①

It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what

is covered in the talk. ②

My hometown is no longer what it used to be.

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◆定语从句

The flat is in a building on Pingan Street. It is not far from Heping School.→The flat is in a building on Pingan Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.

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分词结构

①

We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening ,看电视，玩游戏(watching TV or

playing games).

②

听到这个(Hearing this), a few people began to run after him. ③

出生在美国(Born in America), Thomas Edison was a great

scientist and inventor. ◆

with结构

①

A terrible accident happened yesterday, 九人致死，将近八十人受伤

( with nine people killed and almost eighty injured)

②

He was carrying a bedroll and a large bag on his shoulder, 左手拿着一个大的手提箱(with a large suitcase in his left hand).

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倒装句(inverted sentences) ①Although we are tired, we are happy.→

Tired as we are, we are happy. ②Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man.

③May all your dreams come true!

May our friendship last till the end of the universe!

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被动语态(passive voice) ①

Opinions are divided on the question.

②

All classes are taught by teachers with rich

experience in teaching foreign students.

③

New factories, houses and roads have been built.

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巧妙的改写

（1）．Only 改成no one but

Only Tom passed the exam last week. →

No one but Tom passed the exam. （2）．as soon as …改成No sooner…than…/

Hardly…when…/Immediately…/

The

moment /minute/second

No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started. （3）．have sb/sth do/done

The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken.

(4）．变换插入语的位置(parenthesis) ①

However, they suggest fees should be charged low. →

They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.

②

I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent,

and how well you’ve learned Chinese. →

This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent,

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and how well you’ve learned Chinese.

(5). 用同位语代替非限制性定语从句(appositive) ①

Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.→

Meimei, a girl of seven, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.

②Shakespeare,一个贫苦家庭的孩子( a son from a poor family) ,

wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world. ◆

其它

（1）注重句子的开头

①

用with复合结构开头

With the sun setting in the west, we had to wave goodbye to the workers.

With his help, we've learned how to analyze and settle problems.

②

用非谓语动词形式开头

ⅰ）In order to improve our English, our school held an English contest.

ⅱ）Walking towards the cinema, he met a foreigner.

（2）长短句交错使用（注意：应突出主题句；长句子并非越长越好）

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相关过渡语（Transitional words and phrases）

1). 表示时间顺序: first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later，first of all, finally, at last…

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2). 表示空间顺序: near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side…

3). 表示比较、对照: like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, nevertheless, otherwise…

4). 表示因果关系: because, for, as a result, therefore,thus…

5). 表示递进关系: besides, what’s more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore,

in addition, on top of…

6). 表示并列关系: and, as well as, also…

7). 表示总结性: in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief,

to conclude…

Step4. Sample Writings(get the students to translate the sentences according to the Chinese ) 感谢你的来信

Thanks for you email/I'm glad to hear from you. 你就要去澳大利亚了，这可真是太棒了。

How wonderful it is that you are going to Australia. 可是听说你对于去悉尼还是去北部地区进退两难，我很难过。

However,hearing that you are in a dilemma whether you should stay in Sydney or go to the Northern territory, I'm really sorry. 就个人而言，我宁愿去悉尼。

Personally, I would rather visit Sydney.

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那儿有那么多的好玩的地方可以参观，比如悉尼歌剧院，野生动物园，你一定会玩得非常开心的。

With so many interesting places to visit there,like the Sydney Opera House and wildlife parks, you will definitely have a good time. 此外，悉尼还有很多大的店铺，餐馆，这些都会让你深深地爱上这座城市。

Besides, there are also lots of great shops and restaurants in this city, which will surely make you fall in deep love with it. 然而，不管你如何选择，都要享受你的旅行。

Anyway,whichever you choose, just enjoy your trip. The complete email(ask a student to read it) Dear Haidi, Thanks for you email. How wonderful it is that you are going to Australia.However, hearing that you are in a dilemma whether you should syay in Sydney or go to the Northern territory, I'm really sorry.

Personally, I would rather visit Sydney.With so many interesting places to visit there,like the Sydney Opera House and wildlife parks, you will definitely have a good time. Besides, there are also lots of great shops and restaurants in this city, which will surely make you fall in deep love with it. Anyway,whichever you choose, just enjoy your trip. I hope you will find my advice useful. Best wishes,

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yours, Li Hua Step5. Homework 假如你是Liming, 你的朋友Lihua就高中选修科目的选择

向你征求意见，请写封email进行回复，词数150左右。

参考词汇：文科

arts

理科

science

选修课

electives

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