Using LanguageⅡ名师教学设计1

读后续写

做题步骤及方法：

1.

Thorough reading(通读全文) 1)

Find out the genre(文体) _______________________________________________________________________________________________ Narration: who; when; where; what; why; how 2)

Classify the 10 underlined words and phrases.（划线词语分类）

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. Logical plotting（情节设计）

设计的关键在于搭建本段与前文、后文的桥梁，特别注意动作描写、语言描写、心理描写

Tip1. Focus on the given sentence of paragraph 2 first, because some information should be mentioned in paragraph 1. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Tip2. Make use of the key words in the given sentences to infer more information. _______________________________________________________

_____________________________________________ Tip3. Sometimes, the general key word can guide us to imagine reasonably. The general key word:__________________________________________________________________________________ Step 3：Vivid Writing (修改) 1.

Use linking words effectively.(连接词) ________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.

Add some details reasonably.（添加合理细节）

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Use different sentence structures.（句型变化）

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Ⅱ.读后续写

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成

一个完整的故事。

After graduation,Jason went to work in a big business. The schedule was very tight and he was so busy working, travelling from one place to another,that he was always on business for weeks without going to his mother's home.Andthis year,he hadn't seen his mother for montha.Mother's Day was coming up,and he usually managed to go back home,but this year he was just too busy and too tired.One day when he was driving in a small town,he saw a flower shop. He said to himself,"I know what I will do.'ll send my mother some flowers." He stopped and went into the flower shop and saw a boy talking to the girl in it."How many roses can I get for five dollars?"the boy asked.The girl was trying to explain that roses were expensive.Maybe the boy would be happy with something else. "No,I have to have roses,"he said."It has to be redroses,because my mum likes them best.It is Mother's Day. Iwant to get something special."He was stubbom. The gid in the shop looked up at Jaon and was just shaking her

head. Something inside Jason was touched by the boy's voice.It seemed that he wanted to get those roses very much.Jason looked at the boy and said to the girl that he would pay for the boy's roses. The girl looked at the boy and said,"Okay,I wil give you a donen red roses for your dollan."The young man almost jumped into the air.He took the flowers and ran out. It was worth more than fifty dollars just to see that kind of excitement. Jason ordered his own flowers and asked the girl to have them delivered to his mother.After that,with a relief he drove down the road. 注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。

词语。

Paragraph 1: Not long after his driuing,he saw the boy_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:

Jason stood there in silence____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________