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Unit 3

Australia Using language II----writing

湖北十堰市第二中学

李淑云

Teaching Goals:

1. Write an outline of the writing task on P29. 2. Learn some skills on how to write a letter on giving advice. 3. Try to write a letter on how to give sb advice.. Teaching Procedures: Step 1.

Read this email on Page 29 and write a reply.

This email ask you for advice, so you should plan your replay carefully, you need to: 1. List all the reasons for and against the trip; 2. Decide on your point of view with reasons; 3. Put the reasons in the order of importance; 4. Write your email in this way:

·tell Li Haidi what you suggest.

·give each of your reasons in one paragraph. 5. Finish it in this way:

I hope you will find my advice useful.

Best wishes,

(your signature) Step 2. Discussion 1.Write down your writing outline quickly. 2.Read your outline in the group of four . 3.Discuss each student’s writing structure and point out the possible mistakes.

Step 3.Read the sample writing aloud Dear Haidi, Thanks for your email. How wonderful it is that you are going to Australia! I think you’ll have a great time on the camping trip and you’ll get to see native animals in their natural setting. Also you’ll make some good friends during the trip, which is much more difficult while staying in a hotel in the city.Don’t worry about the dangerous creatures. They are not as dangerous as some people think and anyway you’ll be with an experienced tour guide who will keep you safe. Just do everything the guide says and you’ll have a safe and enjoyable time.Do write again when you get back and tell me all about your trip. Your friend,

John Step4. Learning writing skills(直击考场作文——如何写建议信) Imagine you are the adviser who deals with students’ problems. Write a letter to give Li Hua some helpful advice. 建议信

内容：写信人就某事或某问题提出建议

主体时态：一般现在时

正文部分：必须就对方问题给出明确答复;建议的内容要层次清楚、目的明确，且有合理性和说服力；语言要正确、清晰、礼貌、体贴使对方易于接受。

Structures:

how your appreciation for sb’s idea and encourage him /her

list the advice about the student’s problem

express your wish

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写作模式

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自我介绍、说明目的+委婉提出建议及改进措施或提出忠告+礼貌地总结或期盼回复

To whom it concern(相关负责人）

As a…, I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation for your kind assistance as always. Meanwhile, I feel that it would be beautiful to express my views concerning…

In the first place, … I would also recommend…Last but not least…

I hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.

Yours sincerely

Xiao

xiang

常用的句式: 1.You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some

suggestions. 2. I would like to suggest that…

3. It is important to…

4. It helps to…

5. It should be a good idea to…

6. I think it would be a good idea/more

beautiful if you could…

7.I hope you will find these suggestions

helpful

Step5.Learning&read考试真题——范文学习

假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Smith打算创办一份中学生英文刊物，特来信询问你对创办本刊物的看法。请你根据以下提示，给他写封回信，表明你的看法，同时提出建议，并简述建议的理由。

1、表明看法; 2、建议：设Sports News，Teacher’s advice Students’ Voice栏目。注意

1、词数100左右 2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：栏目column Dear Smith,

I am very excited to learn that you are going to start a magazine.________________________ _______________________________________

Dear Mr Smith,

I am very excited to learn that you are going to start a magazine. It is indeed a wonderful idea and I hope for its success. I would like the magazine to have three columns: Sports news,Teachers’ Advice and students’ Voice. I am a sports fan. From Sports news we can learn about what is going on in the sports field. In

Teachers’ Advice, our teachers can give

us such

help as

we may not be able to get in the classroom.

students’ Voice will allow us to freely express our

thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies

I hope that this magazine will be successful, and I am looking forward

to reading it as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua Step6.Writing practice (即时演练) 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据以下要点写封回信。

1、参加中文学习班；2、看中文书刊、电视；3、学唱中文歌曲；4、交中国朋友。

注意：

1、词数100左右；2、可适当增加细节；3、开头和结尾已

给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter，

I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well._____________________________________________________

Step7.Homework Finish the passage by using the sentences and structure which you have learned .Try your best to avoid the spelling mistakes