Learning about Language教案1

2. If I am given a time machine , I will pay a visit to the future. Writing -----恰当运用非谓语优化基础写作学案

Lead-in Let’s correct a composition!

基础写作：以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。

1.一个乞丐(beggar)在路边讨钱(ask for money)。李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。

2.乞丐很生气，伸出(stick out)拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了(trip over)。

3.李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。

4.李先生拿出了一张百元钞票(a 100-yuan note)。突然一阵风把钞票吹到空中。

5.乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。

A beggar

One day, Mr. Li hurried on his way to work, a beggar on the roadside asking for money, Mr. Li pay no attention to him. the beggar got angry and stuck out his walking stick, that almost tripped Mr. Li over. Realized the beggar was a disabled person, Mr. Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him. Taking out a 100-yuan note, which was suddenly blown into the air by the wind. Seen this, the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note, which made Mr. Li so surprising that he stood there with his mouth open. 一、写作中常见问题

二、解题技巧指导

如何写好基础写作？

在英语基础写作中常涉及到非谓语动词的运用，非谓语动词的正确使用可使行文简洁、流畅，是英语写作水平较高的体现。

巩固练习一

Combine the two sentences 1. When our future school is seen from the space, our future school looks like a plate.

____________________________________________________________________________________ 3. As he knew some English，

he offered to be an interviewer for us.

巩固练习二

1)_______(get) back my story, he refused the invitation．

2) The beautiful girl tried to kill herself only _________(save)．

3)When________(face)with a strong enemy, they had always retreated．

4) We hurried to the station only _________ (tell) that the train had left. 5). The students go into the school,___________________(说着笑着) 6). The heavy rain lasted quite a few days, _________(destroy) most of the crops. 巩固练习三

Translation 1）知道自己的钱不够，又不想向自己的父亲借，他决定把表当（pawn）了.

____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 2）从窗口望去，我看见有几只小鸟在树上歌唱。

____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 3）为了做一个有吸引力的广告，很多人要一起熬夜工作。

____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 4）当问及刘翔的教练时，他情不自禁地哭了

____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 5）灰太狼（The

Big Big Wolf）总是带着一顶带补丁（patch）的黄帽子，不管多努力，总抓不住羊。（goat）____________________________________________________________________________________ 1

____________________________________________________________________________________ 实战演练

请看以下关于广告的介绍：

1.随着社会的发展，我们生活在一个到处都可以看到、听到广告(advertisement)的世界里。

2.为了促进销售(sale)，大多数企业在收音机、电脑和电视做广告以便吸引成百万人的注意力。

3.没有人能避免(avoid)受到广告的影响。

4.很多人看了一件产品的广告后都会去购买它，并没有考虑广告的可靠性(reliability)。

5.自己的看法；

写作要求：用5句话表达以上内容，尽量使用非谓语。

____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ Homework Improve the composition above.

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