Using LanguageⅠ教学设计与反思

书面表达专题

建议信How to write a letter for advice

【课程标准—目标制定依据】

1、课标要求

新课标提出，英语写作，要既能把意思表达清楚，有逻辑性，还要有情感有意义，正确运用标点符号，拼写及语法运用也要正确，适当要有创造性。

2、教材分析

本单元的写作围绕提出建议展开，本节重点是掌握英语中提出建议的常用句式结构，掌握建议类书信的惯用模式。

3、学情分析

我所带的学员英语基础薄弱，写作能力有待进一步提高，因此需要用最基础最简单的引导方式来激发学生写作的意识。

4、学习重难点

重点：通过识记掌握建议类书信的基本句式

难点：通过写作练习，能初步掌握写作的基本技巧

【学习目标】

1、通过对建议类写作试题的分析，使学生初步掌握写作审题的技巧

2、引导学生总结建议类句式的用法使学生在语境中掌握建议

3、通过随堂写作来检验自己对本节内容的掌握程度

【评价任务】

1、在老师引导下完成活动1（评价目标1）

2、教师协助学生完成活动2，通过小组讨论，分工合作（评价目标2）

3、独立完成活动3，综合运用进行自我评估（评价目标3）

【学习方法】

小组合作，讨论；教师引导归纳总结；学习与思考相结合

【学习过程】

Step 1

Lead-in and warming up 问题

学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小, 家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。

建议

政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。

假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：

参考词汇: 穿行

thread one’s way

天桥

overpass

第一步：审题

养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：

思考的问题

第几人称？（person）

文章的题材是什么？

要写的文章主题是什么

(topic) 怎样安排信息点的顺序？

(order) 动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)

(when)

样题分析

常用套语

A．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图) 1．After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that

…

2．I am very glad to hear that you want to…

3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter 4.I am writing to you for the purpose of ----- 5. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions.

B. 表达建议（body）

1.first，firstly，secondly…．then，after that，in the end．finally．Meanwhile, what’s more．．．

2 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could …

3. I would like to suggest/recommend that…

4. If I were you, I would…

5. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…

C.

建议信结尾常用句式

1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.

2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions

practical/useful/helpful. 3. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 4.

I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. 5.

In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. 适当运用模板

Dear Bob,

I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to

(引出主题).

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to

. Then, it also helps to

. Besides, it should be a good idea to

. You can also

. (此三句不同

的句式提出建议)

As to

, I suggest

(有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition,

(其他建议). I'm sure

(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).

I'm looking forward to

(表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua Dear____,

You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____, and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions here.

In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _____.

I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.

Good luck with you. Yours, XX

第二步：搜索相关词组或句型

学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街

stand next to…

primary…

face/be faced with…

the main street…

There’s a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street. Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street. Standing next to a primary school, our school

is faced with/faces the main street. 高峰期交通繁忙….. traffic….

during the rush hours

at peak time，a large current of cars and people 交通繁忙”可译为: traffic jam

congestion

交通堵塞

be choke up with

be crammed with 被…

加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤

send…to…, fetch…. ,

Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier. 加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤

What’s more, …

pick up…. make…. To make things worse/ what’s worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded. In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. What’s more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险

thread one’s way，when doing It is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the

road. 政府应采取措施,如修天桥等

suggest/suggestion,

take steps/ measures/ action to do…

such as I suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass. My suggestion is that the government should…

t is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building…

第三步. 连句成文

A.

As a consequence B.

According to the phenomenon stated above

C.

When it comes to traffic jams D.

What makes things worse is that

Next to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. ___________, it’s crammed with cars during the rush hour. _______________ children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. ___________, it’s of great danger for the students to go through the traffic. _________________, it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpass.

练习

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。

要点：⑴

参加中文学习班；

⑵

看中文书刊、电视；

⑶

学唱中文歌曲；

⑷

交中国朋友。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。

Dear Peter,

I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese well.____

_____________________________________________ Best wishes,

Dear Peter,

I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try writing to me in Chinese next time. Best wishes,

Li Hua