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[题目要求] 假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter对北京的香山红叶节很感兴趣，来信向你询问此事。请你用英语给他写一封100词左右的回信。

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Dear Peter，

I'm glad that you're interested in the Xiangshan Red Leaves Festival in Beijing, China. Here I'd like to tell you something about this special festival. 开幕时间(每年10月中旬)、地点(北京香山)→此时的北京面貌→特色活动(爬香山、赏红叶、参观古寺庙、品尝当地美食) Welcome to Beijing! It will be more wonderful if I can see you in Beijing. Best wishes! Yours sincerely，

Li Hua [答案示例] Dear Peter，

I'm glad that you're interested in the Xiangshan Red Leaves Festival in Beijing, China. Here I'd like to tell you something about this special festival. It_is_supposed_to_open_in_every_mid-October_in_Xiangshan,_west_of_Beijing,_China._At_that_time_you_can_see_the_most_beautiful_autumn_in_Beijing._Under_the_blue_sky_are_the_tree-covered_high_mountains,_just_like_a_red_world. Walking_through_thousands_of_trees,_you_will_be_hidden_in_an_ocean_of_red_leaves._People_in_various_clothes_add_to_the_unique_lovely_scenes._You_can_not_only_visit_some_old_temples,_but_also_taste_the_delicious_local_foods. Welcome to Beijing! It will be more wonderful if I can see you in Beijing. Best wishes! Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

主观题强化增分练1篇语法填空＋1篇短改＋1篇写作，限时45分钟

Ⅰ.语法填空

In big cities like Beijing and Guangzhou, the railway stations can look like airports. When you reach the station, first check the big screen for __1__ (you) train number and the 高考资源网版权所有，侵权必究！

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waiting room. It can be hard to figure out the screen if you can't read Chinese, but don't worry, and just ask any worker by __2__ (show) your ticket to him. I always arrive too early at the railway station, but I think it's better to be early __3__ late! Arrive at least half an hour before the train leaves. On the screen you can see your train number again and __4__ (possible) how long it is until it departs. If you don't understand Chinese, keep __5__ eye on the screen and ask the workers. Every time it's time __6__ (board) a train many people will stand up and rush to the __7__ (gate). If you are unsure, always ask the staff. Only when the train __8__ (arrive) will they let you in. Check the correct car number and head to the right door. The train staff will check your ticket __9__ you board so you can't accidentally board the wrong train. The tickets might __10__ (check) again when you get off the train or during the journey. 语篇解读：这是一篇说明文。作者以自身的经历告诉我们上火车前的注意事项。

1．your

分析句子结构可知，此处用形容词性物主代词your作定语，修饰“train number”。

2．showing

句中的by为介词，其后用动名词作宾语。故填showing。

3．than

作者经常很早地到达火车站，他认为提前到达总比晚些好。根据语境可知，此处用than。

4．possibly

分析句子结构可知，此处用副词作状语。

5．an

keep an eye on为固定搭配，意为“注意，留意”。

6．to board

It's time to do sth.为固定句式，意为“该是做某事的时候了”。

7．gates

根据下文中的“Check the correct car number and head to the right door.”可知，入口不只一处，所以此处用名词的复数形式。

8．arrives

“the train”为第三人称单数，所以空格处填arrives。

9．before

在上火车前，检票员会检查车票。根据语境可知，此处用before引导时间状语从句。

10．be checked

在路途中或下火车时，车票还要再被检查。句中的主语“The tickets”与谓语动词“check”之间是被动关系，所以用被动语态；情态动词后用动词原形。

Ⅱ.短文改错

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volleyball on every day. When another chance of trying out arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team. From this, I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared. 答案：第一句：favored→favors 第二句：experience→experiences 第三句：as后加a 第四句：play→playing 第五句：but→and; which→that 第六句：去掉on 第七句：full→fully 第九句：convincing→convinced; 第二个I→we Ⅲ.书面表达

假定你是李华，你校将于10月28日(下周日)下午3点在学校大礼堂举办一次传统文化艺术展，展品包括师生们创作的具有中国传统特色的剪纸、陶艺等艺术品以及书画作品。请你给外教Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍此次艺术展并邀请他来参加。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：剪纸paper-cutting；陶艺pottery Dear Peter，

Yours，

Li Hua 参考范文：

Dear Peter，

I am writing to invite you to the art exhibition that will be held at 3 p．m. next Sunday, October 28th, in the Great Hall of our school. The exhibition includes a variety of art forms, such as traditional Chinese paper-cutting and pottery works, as well as excellent handwriting works and paintings. These items are all created by the students and teachers of our school. They have been chosen from hundreds of art pieces. I know you're interested in Chinese traditional culture, so don't miss this good opportunity. You can also discuss the 高考资源网版权所有，侵权必究！

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works with their creators. I believe that not only can you watch a wonderful art exhibition, but also enjoy and feel the real Chinese traditional culture. Looking forward to seeing you next Sunday! Yours，

Li Hua

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