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江西省西山学校高中部高三年级英语学科集备教案

作文高分的“关键因素”晒课导学案

一作文讲评

张福秋

知识与技能：

过程与方法：

1.

The key factors to master the high score of composition. . 1.

Description and critique of an essay.

情感态度与价值观：

Where there is a will, there is a way. 教学目标：

Ask the students to master the key factors of the high score of composition. 教学重点：

Using the correct simple sentence to express the content.

教学难点：

The transformation of the simple sentence to the high spot sentence.

Students can write the correct simple sentences. ————————————————————————————————————————

教学过程：

一：诱思导学: 自学高考评分标准；背诵作文及常见过渡词；

二：自主学习:目标是让学生先学会使用正确简单句表达内容（先无错）；

下面的句子摘录于我班某某同学的作文，错误及其的严重，请你改正错误。并告知这个学生错误的原因。（句子得分1分）

1、Dear Peter, I had receive gift. 2、As my birthday drawing near, 3、With my birthday is coming, 4、It is going to be my birthday after a few days .5、I know you are hope to visit China. 6、I hope you can happy. 7、Paper cutting have long history in China.8、The gift is a paper-cut is drawn by myself.9、English novel which is well sold. 10、I very like it. 11、Receive your gift make me very happy.

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江西省西山学校高中部高三年级英语学科集备教案

12、I have received the birthday gift of yours. 三：合作探究: 简单句”到“高级亮点句”的蜕变

——整合 你的这位同学这个作文得分15分，请你帮他提高一个档次。

1、Your birthday is coming . 2、I have prepared a gift for you. 3、It is a Chinese painting “bamboo”. 4、I specially drew it for you by myself. 5、In Chinese culture, it carries many best wishes and excellent qualities. 6、It is straight and is green all year round. 8、It is always full of life. 9、It is hard outside but hollow inside. 四：达标测试: 欣赏作文（江西高考真题），得分多少？好在哪里？

星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：

1.时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；

2.活动的过程； 3.你对于这次活动的评论。

注意：1. 词数120左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice day. At 8:00 a.m, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way, we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help.About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.

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江西省西山学校高中部高三年级英语学科集备教案

The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time ! Homework ：写作（2017年江西高考作文）

假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。

内容包括：

（1）时间和地点；

（2）（2）内容：学习唐诗；

（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。

（4）注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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