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Unit 3 Computers Using language-writing

Write a description of your android in the future and what it can do. You may draw a picture of it if you wish

You need to imagine what problems and delights this android might have to deal with. Putting yourself in someone else’s shoes is a very important way of understanding how other people feel.

[文体感知] 想象类作文是作者根据已有的生活经验和知识，超越现实生活来勾画出从未见过或者不曾出现过的生活图景的文章。

想象类作文可分为三段：

首段，进行概述；

中间部分，具体描述；

结尾，对文章进行总结。

本文是一篇说明文。题目要求学生描述理想中的机器人，属于开放性作文。学生需要发挥想象描述自己心目中的

机器人的名字、外表、大小、性格、功能等。这是学生们发挥自己想象力的好机会。为了避免单纯描写带来的枯燥性，可以适当运用修辞手法，如拟人、比喻等，使文章显得更加生动。

[增分佳句] 1．My ideal robot in the future will be like ... and ... or perhaps it will help me ... 2．My ideal robot in the future is called ... 3．He/She does all the work around the house. 4．He/She is very patient and never complains .. 5．He/She can be with me whenever I feel lonely. 6．My ideal robot in the future can work as/serve

7．Great changes will take place in the future.

8．I believe our dream will come true some day . 9．Have you ever thought about ... in the next 30 or 50 years?

10．In addition, there will be super computers or robots which can help us do ...

第一步：审题谋篇

一、审题

1．确定体裁：本文为说明文；

2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；

3．确定时态：本文的主要时态应用一般现在时。

二、构思

开头：对我理想的机器人进行总体说明；

主体：对我理想的机器人的形态、功能作细致描述；

结尾：再次概括评价。

第二步：词汇推敲

1．look_like

看上去像

2．remind_sb._of_sth.

提醒某人某事

3．feel_lonely

感到孤独

4．emotion

情绪

5．share_the_joys_and_sorrows

分享快乐和痛苦

第三步：句式锻造

开头：总体说明

1．我未来理想的机器人是个漂亮的小女孩，她是蓝色的，身高一米六。

My ideal robot in the future is a beautiful little girl, and she_is_blue_and_about_1.6_metres_tall.

sample My ideal robot of the future

My ideal robot of the future is no longer like a cold machine but like a human being with warm skin and changeable expressions.

He can do all kinds of housework such as cleaning the house, washing clothes and cooking the dinner. He can also look

after the children, taking them to school, playing with them and helping them with their homework. Moreover, he can sense my feelings. When I am upset and lonely, it will give me comfort and keep me company. Besides, he can send out warnings and protect me from danger.

In short he will make my life easier, happier and more colorful.

通过学习这篇写作指导，你掌握了用英文描写理想中的机器人的写作方法了吗?

请写一篇你的理想中的机器人的文章，然后与范文对照，找出其中的不足并加以改进。