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基础写作中如何用定语从句合并信息

【学习目标】学会在基础写作中用定语从句合并信息。

【学习重点与难点】熟练掌握用定语从句合并信息的步骤。

【学法指导及使用说明】认真研究问题导学和知识梳理，完成预习自测，初步掌握用定语从句合并信息的技能。并填写你的疑惑和收获。探究案和训练案课堂上做。

预习案

一、

问题导学

阅读2017年高考基础写作的任务和范文，思考如何在基础写作中运用定语从句。

假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：

（1）球队活动；

（2）报名方式及截止日期。

注意：

词数100左右；

可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

范文：

Dear Eric,

I am Li Hua. Occasionally learning that you are addicted to table tennis, I am writing to sincerely invite you to join the table tennis team in our school, which is aimed at developing our interests and improving our skills. Considering the enormous benefits, which we can earn steadily from tennis practice, including preventing us from getting short-sighted and keeping physically healthy, we are lost in training course. Definitely, as for the activities, we will be honored to be given high-level training by a professional coach every Friday around 3-5 pm. Meanwhile, we will be divided into several groups to conduct competitions every two weeks. If you are interested in what I have stated above, sign up on our school website before September 1st. I’m looking forward to your reply even your appearance in our training center soon.

Yours, Li Hua 二、知识梳理

在基础写作中用定语从句合并信息的步骤：

如：写信目的：邀请他加入你所在的校乒乓球队

I am writing to sincerely invite you to join the table tennis team in our school. 加入的好处：培养兴趣和提升技能

It is aimed at developing our interests and improving our skills. 合并结果：I am writing to sincerely invite you to join the table tennis team in our school, which is aimed at developing our interests and improving our skills. 1. 先确定先行词：将两个信息点各自成句，再找两句中共同的名词或代词，将其定为先行词。

2. 再确定主句：根据文章所描述的主题来确定较重要的信息为主句。

3. 然后确定关系词：根据先行词是指人还是物以及先行词在从句充当的句子成分来确定关系词。

4. 当一个信息的整体是另一个信息的主语或宾语时，可译为“这，那”时，用which指代。

三、预习自测

Task 1

用定语从句合并句子。（先确定先行词，再代入主句，最后确定关系词）

1.

A plane is a machine. The machine can fly. _______________________________________________________________________________

2.

The girl is Mary. We saw her yesterday. _______________________________________________________________________________ Task 2按照步骤把下面的简单句整合成定语从句。

1. 那些只顾个人利益而滥砍树木的人应当受到惩罚。

Step1. (拆分) 那些人应当受到惩罚。

Step2. (翻译)Those people should be punished Step3. (整合)Those people who cut down the trees just for their own interest should be punished. 2．我昨天借杂志的那个图书馆很大。

Step1：______________________________________________________________________________ Step2：______________________________________________________________________________ Step3：______________________________________________________________________________ 3.

流过村庄的小河对他们有很大帮助。

Step1: _____________________________________________________________________________

Step2: _____________________________________________________________________________

Step3: _______________________________________________________________________________ 4.

中秋节是一个全家团圆, 赏月、吃月饼的传统节日。

Step1: _____________________________________________________________________________

Step2: _____________________________________________________________________________

Step3: _______________________________________________________________________________ Task3

用定语从句翻译每组句子。

1.

这并不意味取得高分数的学生就是优秀的学生。

____________________________________________________________________________________ 2.

任何意志坚强的人都能实现他的梦想，享受多彩的生活。

____________________________________________________________________________________ 3.

他有很多书，其中有一些是英文版的。

____________________________________________________________________________________ 4.

我昨天借杂志的那家图书馆很大。

____________________________________________________________________________________

我的疑惑： 我的收获：

探究案

用定语从句整合每组信息。

改写句子

“I see many running creatures. They are made of metal and glass. Their feet are round. They have four eyes. Two of the four eyes are red. Inside I see soft shapes. They can move.”

____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ Our class is a big family. It consists of 37 girls and 29 boys. Most of them are mainly from the

countryside. Zhao Zeguo is a kind-hearted boy. He is always ready to help others. He is such a good boy that we all like him. ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 训练案

请按以下内容要点，用5个句子(尽可能多地使用定语从句）写一篇有关你学校的短文：

水富县第一中学是一所历史悠久、校园优美的学校。有众多经验丰富的老师和才华横溢的学生，是水富县最好的学校之一。这就是很多学生都渴望来这里读书的原因。我为我是水富县第一中学的学生感到骄傲。我将在这里度过三年的美好时光。在这些日子里，我将会学到很多知识。这些日子我将终生难忘。

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作业

重写这次月考作文（至少使用2句以上的定语从句）