Section A 2d—3c优质教案设计

Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came? 教学目标：

1 语言目标：能运用过去时态描写过去发生的事情

2 技能目标：能听懂有关过去发生事件，能简单描写过去发后的事件

3 情感目标：能过学习本课，培养学生在困境中互帮互助的品质

教学重点

单词短语: rainstorm, suddenly, alarm , go off , pick up , strange, report, area, wood, light, window, match, beat, heavily, against, asleep, fall asleep, die down, rise, apart, passage, pupil, bright, play ground, bell, completely, silence, in silence, recently, date, tower, at first, realize, truth 句子:

1. What were you doing at eight last night? I was taking a shower.

2. What was she doing at the time of the rainstorm? She was doing her homework.

3. What was he doing when the rainstorm came? He was reading in the library when the rainstorm came.

4. What was Ben doing when it began to rain heavily? When it began to rain, Ben was helping his mom make dinner.

5. What was Jenny doing while Linda was sleeping? While Linda was sleeping, Jenny was helping Mary with her homework 语法：过去进行时。

教学难点:

when, while引导的时间状语从句中的过去时和过去进行时

课时划分

Section A 1 (1a -2d) Section A 2 (3a-3c) Section A 3 (Grammar focus-4c) Section B 1 (1a-2e) Section B 2 (3a-Self check)

Section A 1 (1a-2d) Step 1 Warming up

Yesterday, there was a rainstorm. Where were they when the rainstorm came? Here are some reports. For example: A: Where were you when the rainstorm came? B: I was in the library. A: What were you doing when the rainstorm came? B: I was waiting for the bus at the bus stop. Work on 1a. Where were the people at the time of the rainstorm? Match the

statements with the people in the picture. 1. _____ I was in the library. 2. _____ I was in my house. 3._____ I was on the street. 4._____ I was at the bus stop. Step 2 Speaking

Look at the pictures and answer the questions by using “was/were + doing”

For example:

A: What was your sister/brother doing at the time of the rainstorm?

B: He _____________________. Step 3 Listening

What were they doing when the rainstorm came? Let’s listen. Pay attention to

“was/were +doing”

1b Listen to the TV report and circle the correct response.

a. doing my homework / studying

b. playing basketball / reading

c. going to work / waiting for the bus

d. walking home / shopping

Listen again and answer the questions.

1) What’s the weather like today?

2) How was the weather yesterday?

3) How was the rainstorm yesterday?

4) Why is the boy glad he didn’t decide to play basketball?

5) Why did the man still get wet when he had an umbrella? Pair work:

1c Talk about what the people in 1a were doing at the time of the rainstorm.

Step 4 Listening 2a Listen and number the pictures 1-5. 2b Listen again. Fill in the blanks in the sentences in 2a. My alarm didn’t go off so I ______ up late.

I _____ to the bus stop but I still missed the bus. I ____________ for the bus when it began to rain heavily. I ____ so busy _______ for the umbrella that I didn’t see a car coming.

I took a hot shower and ____ some warm food. Listen again. Look at the statements below. Are they true or false? 1) They boy didn’t wake up until seven thirty because

his alarm didn’t work.

2) He arrived at school at eight. 3) He still didn’t catch the bus although her ran to the bus stop.

4) While he was waiting for the bus, it suddenly started to rain heavily. 5) While he was busy looking for the umbrella in his schoolbag, a car came and got water all over him. Step 5 Speaking

2c Use the information in 2a to retell the story in a conversation between the boy and

a TV reporter. 2d Read the conversation and fill in the blanks. What was Linda doing? Where was she? 7:00pm 8:00pm 9:00pm

Role-play the conversation. Step 6 Language points

1. My alarm didn’t go off so I woke up late.

alarm n. 闹钟

2. I was waiting for the bus when it began to rain heavily.

1) begin v. (began) 开始

2) heavily adv. 在很大程度上；大量地

3. So, when the rainstorm suddenly came, …

suddenly

adv.

突然；忽然

4. That’s strange.

strange adj.

奇特的，奇怪的；不可思议的

5. I called at seven and you didn’t pick up.

pick up(=pick up the phone) 接电话

pick up 还有以下含义：

1) 拾起；抱起

2) (开车)接人；搭载

Step 7 Speaking

Make a survey. Ask your partners in your group what they were doing at the following time. Fill in the form then give a report. A: What were you doing yesterday at 7:00? B: I was reading. Step 8 Summary do my homework

做我的作业

play basketball

打篮球

go to work

去工作

wait for the bus

等公共汽车

walk home

步行回家

black clouds

乌云

go off

(闹钟)发出响声

wake up

醒来

take a hot shower

洗热水澡

pick up (= pick up the phone)

接电话

1. What was the girl/ boy doing at the

time of…?

She/ He was…

2. What were you doing when the rainstorm came?

I was…

Step 10 Homework Write a short passage. Your passage should include the following information. 1) What were you doing at 8:00 yesterday evening? 2) Where were you? 3) Who were you with?

Section A 2 (3a-3c) Step 1 Revision

Ask your partner what he/she was doing last night, then give a report. Step 2 Free talk Rainstorm is coming…

Preparation…

After the rainstorm…

Step 3 Reading

1. Fast reading Read the passage quickly and answer the questions.

1) Were winds strong or weak? 2) Were clouds black or white? 3) Was the sky dark or bright? 4) Did neighbors stay inside or clean up outside. 5) How was the neighborhood after the storm? 6) How were the windows? Were they good or broken? 7) Where was the rubbish? Match the main idea with each paragraph. Para. 1

The activities during (在……期间) the rainstorm. Para. 2

The result (结果) after the rainstorm. Para. 3

The weather before the rainstorm. Para. 4

The preparation (准备) before the rainstorm. 2. Work on 3a. Read the passage and answer the following questions 1) What was the weather like before the heavy ran started? 2）What was the neighborhood like after the storm? Keys: 1. Black clouds were making the sky very dark. With no light outside, it felt like midnight. 2. The neighborhood was in a mess. 3. Work on 3b. Read the passage again and complete the sentences using information

from the passage.

1) When the news on TV was reported, strong winds were _____________ outside.

2）While Ben’s mom was making sure the radio was working, his dad ________________.

3) Ben _____________________ when the heavy rain finally started. 4) When Ben _______________at 3:00 a.m., the wind _________________. Keys: 1) were blowing

2) was putting pieces of wood over the windows

3) was helping his mom make dinner

4) fell asleep: was dying down Step 4 Speaking Work on 3c. Discuss the questions with a partner. “Although the storm broke many things apart, it brought families and neighbors

closer together.” What other can bring people closer together? How can we help

each other in times of difficulty? Step 5 Language points 1. With no light outside, it felt like midnight.

此句中介词with表示一种伴随状况，同时还包含着某种因果关系，表示“因某

种状况的存在而导致……”, 因此可翻译成“由于；因为”等。

2. Ben’s dad… while his mom was making sure the flashlights and radio were

working.

1) 此句中的连词while的意思是

“当……的时候；和……同时”，while还可以表示“而；然而；但”之意，用来说明和强调两种事情或情形不同。

2) make sure“确认，查明，核实；确保；设法保证”，其后可接句子，或接介词

of及宾语，用来引入需要确认的内容。

3) 此句中的work表示机器，器官等

“运作，运转”，这是动词work的一种基

本用法。

3. Ben was helping his mom make dinner when the rain began to beat heavily against the window.

◆beat作动词，可意为

“敲打；锤砸”。

如：The rain beat against the windows. ◆beat作动词，可意为

“打败；取胜”。

如：I can easily beat him at golf.

◆beat作动词，可意为

“(心)跳动”。如：

Her heart beat so quickly that she could hardly breathe. 4. It was hard to have fun with a serious storm happening outside. It is adj.+ to do sth.

做……怎么样。

It is adj. for sb. to do sth.

对某人来说做……怎么样。

5. Ben could not sleep at first. He finally fell asleep when the wind was dying down at around 3:00 a.m.

sleep可作动词，意为“睡觉”；它也可作名词，意为“睡眠；睡觉”。

如：

The baby is sleeping. Please be quiet. I didn’t get much sleep last night.

asleep是形容词，意为“睡着”，强调状态，常作表语。fall asleep意为“进入梦乡；睡着”。如：

与die 相关的短语: die away 逐渐减弱；逐渐模糊

die out

灭绝；消失

die of/ from 死于……

6. When he woke up, the sun was rising. rise v. & n.

做动词时，常用作不及物动词，意为“升起；增加；提高”。并且还有“起床”的意思。

raise常用作及物动词，含有“(人为地)使升起；使提升”的意思，并且还有“筹集；饲养；抚养”的意思。

Step 6 重点短语

feel like at first fall asleep die down make sure wake up

in a mess clean up

help each other in times of difficulty

Step7 Homework 1. Retell the text. 2. Review language points.

Section A 3 (Grammar focus-4c) Step 1 Revision Look at the pictures and make up the sentences. Step 2 Grammar Focus 根据汉语意思完成句子。

昨晚八点你在做什么？

What ________________ at eight last night? 我在冲澡。

I ___________________. 暴风雨来的时候她在做什么？

What _____________ at the time of the rainstorm? 她在做家庭作业。

She _______________________. 暴风雨来的时候他在做什么？

What was he doing ______ the rainstorm came? 暴风雨来的时候他在图书馆看书。

He was reading in the library ______________________. 开始下大雨的时候本在做什么？

What was Ben doing _____ it began to rain heavily? 开始下雨的时候本在帮他妈妈做晚饭。

When it began to rain, Ben ___________ his mom make dinner. 琳达在睡觉的时候，珍妮在做什么？

What was Jenny doing _____ Linda was sleeping? 琳达在睡觉的时候，珍妮在帮助玛丽做作业。

_______________________, Jenny was helping Mary with her homework. Step 3

过去进行时

1. 构成及用法

过去进行时由“was / were +动词-ing”构成，表示在过去某一时刻或某一段时间正在进行的动作。常与过去进行时连用的时间状语有at eight / nine ... (o’clock) yesterday morning, at that time，from eight to ten yesterday morning等。

如: Alice was doing her homework at six yesterday evening. Mike and his brother were playing soccer from three to four yesterday afternoon. 2. 句式

肯定式：

主语+was/were+动词-ing (+其他). 如：I was swimming at that time. 否定式: 主语+wasn’t/weren’t +动词-ing (+其他).

如：They weren’t listening to music at ten yesterday morning. 疑问式: Was / Were+主语+动词-ing (+其他)?

其肯定回答为：Yes,

主语(人称代词)+ was / were.；

否定回答为：No,

主语(人称代词)+ wasn’t / weren’t.

如：—Was Joe reading at the time of the rainstorm? —Yes, he was. / No, he wasn’t. 过去进行时和现在进行时的区别

现在进行时

含义: 表示现在正在进行的动作。

结构：

is/am/are + doing e.g. I am having an English class.

过去进行时

含义: 表示过去某个时刻正在进行的动作。

结构:

was/were + doing e.g. I was having an English class at this time yesterday.

过去进行时和一般过去时的区别

基本用法

过去进行时

一般过去时

表示在过去的某一时刻或某一时间正在进行的过去某个时间发生过的动作或动作。

存在的状态。

主语

+ was/were + V-ing形式

at 7 yesterday, at that

time, this time last

night等;when与while 引导的时间状语从句。

主语

+ 动词过去式

yesterday, last week, in 1993, once, before, a few days ago等。

结构形式

时间状语

友情提示

表示一个过去正在进行而可能尚未完成的动作。

表示过去已经完成的动作。

过去进行时表示过去正在进行的动作, 而一般过去时则表示一个完整的动作。

e.g. They were writing letters to their friends last night.

昨晚他们在写信给他们的朋友。

(没有说明信是否写完) They wrote letters to their friends last night.

他们昨晚写了信给他们的朋友。

(表达了他们已写好的意思, 整个写的过程已完成。) 过去进行时中的when和while when和while都可表示“当……的时候”, 引导时间状语从句。你知道两者在过去进行时中的用法有什么不同吗？

请仔细观察下面的例句，然后补全空格中的内容。

①

I was walking to school when I saw a cat in a tree. ②When Sally arrived home, her mother was cleaning the house. 主句的动作是持续性的，而从句动作是短暂性的，此时用______引导时间状语从句，主句用__________时态，从句用一般过去时态。

③

While I was sleeping in the bedroom, someone knocked at the door. ④

David fell while he was riding his bike. 主句的动作是短暂性的，从句的动作是持续性的，此时用_______引导从句，主句用__________时态，从句用过去进行时态。

⑤

While Andy was waiting for the bus, he was reading a newspaper. ⑥

He was cleaning his car while I was cooking.

主句和从句的动作在过去的某时刻或某段时间同时发生, 而且动作都是持续性

的, 此时用_______引导从句, 而且主句和从句都用_________时态。

根据汉语意思完成英语句子。

1) 今天上午十点我妈妈在洗衣服。

My mother _____________ clothes at ten this morning. 2) 当他离开时，我正在读书。

I _________________ he ______. 3) 我参观博物馆时，我姐姐在打电话。

My sister _________________ I ________________ the museum. 根据括号内的要求完成下列各题。

1) We were playing football at five yesterday afternoon.(改为否定句) 2) Jane was taking a shower at nine last night.(改为一般疑问句并作肯定回答及否定回答) Step 4

活学活用

4a Look at the table and write sentences with both while and when. 4b

Fill in the blanks with was, were, when or while.

At 7:00 a.m., I woke up. _____ I ____ making my breakfast, my brother ______ listening to the radio. ________ I was eating, the radio news talked about a car accident near our home. My brother and I went out right away to have a look. _____ we got to the place of the accident, the car _____ in bad shape from hitting a tree. But luckily the driver ____ fine. The roads ______ icy because of the heavy snow from the night before. Step 5 Speaking 4c What were you doing at these times last Sunday? Fill in the chart. Then ask your

partner. Step 6 Summary take photos 照相

clean up

打扫(或清除)干净

play the piano

弹钢琴 because of 因为

buy a drink 买饮料 have a look 看一看

leave the house 离开家

turn on the radio 打开收音机

take the car to the car wash 把车送到洗车处

You’re kidding!

你在开玩笑！

过去进行时的用法。

过去进行时与现在进行时的区别。

过去进行时与一般过去时的区别。

Step 7 Homework Make some dialogues with the phrases and sentences in 4c.

Section B 1 (1a-2e) Step 1 Presentation 1a Think of a time when you were late for or couldn’t go to an event.

What was the event?

What was the reason why you were late or couldn’t go?

Tell your partner the story.

Step 2 Listening What happened to the girl? Let’s listen.

1b

Listen and write short answers to the questions.

1. What event happened at the school yesterday? 2. Who missed the event? 3. Which team won at the event? 1c

Listen again. Number the events 1-6 in the order they happened.

____ Kate saw a dog by the side of the road. ____ Kate got to the bus stop. ____ Kate called the Animal Helpline. ____ Kate left the house. ____ Kate waited for someone to walk by. ____ Kate realized her bag was still at home. realize 仔细观察下面例句中动词realize的意义和用法，然后补全结论部分所缺的内容。

【例句】

1. The boy didn’t realize his mistake until his mother told him.

2. When Grace realized what had happened, she was very sorry. 3. She finally realized her dream of becoming an actress. 【结论】

1. 通过对例句1和例句2的观察我们发现，realize与come to know意思相近，意为“______；______”，是及物动词，其后可接名词，也可接宾语从句。

2. 仔细观察例句3可知，realize与come true意思相近，意为“______”。

Listen again and answer the questions. 1) What did she do when she realized her bag was at home? 2) What did she see while she was running back home? 3) What did she want to do when she saw the dog? 4) Why did she wait for someone when she wanted to call the Animal Helpline? Listen again and fill in the blanks.

Kate: What a day I had! _____ I got to the bus stop, I ________ that my bag was still at home! But _____ I ___________ back home, I ____ a dog by the side of the road and it was hurt. I _______ to call the Animal Helpline, but I didn’t have my phone so I had to _______ someone to ________. Then I ____ his phone to call the helpline. Therefore, I didn’t _________ the competition. Step 3 Speaking 1d Talk about why Kate missed the school basketball competition. Student A begins a sentence with while or when. Student B completes the sentence. A: When she got to the bus stop, Kate …

B: When she got to the bus stop, Kate realized that her bag was still at home. A: While she was running back home, …

B: While she was running back home, she saw a dog by the side of the road. Step 4 Warming up 2a Look at the pictures and the title in the passage. What do you think the passage is about? Introduce Dr. Martin Luther King and 911. 阅读指导：

Read the title and first Sentences.

The title can be helpful for you to understand a text. It is also a good idea to

read the first sentence of each paragraph before you read the whole text. Step 5 Reading 2b Read the passage and answer the questions. 1. What are the two events in the passage? 2. When did they happen? Read the passage again. Complete the blanks.

2c

Read the passage again. Are the following statements true (T) or false (F), or is the information not given (NG)? ___ 1. Everyone in American remembers who killed Dr. King. ___ 2. Robert Allen was eating lunch when Dr. King was killed. ___ 3. Robert’s parents were shocked to hear the news.

___ 4. Kate Smith was watching a movie when a plane hit the World Trade Center.

___ 5. Kate didn’t think her friend was telling the truth about the event.

2d

Underline sentences from the passage with similar meanings to the ones below. 1. Not everyone will remember who killed him, but they can remember what they were doing when they heard that he got killed. 2. No one said anything for the rest of dinner. 3. September 11, 2001---- the date alone means something to most people in the US. 4. I had trouble thinking clearly after that because I was very afraid. Fill in the blank and retell the text. People often remember what they were doing when they heard the news of important events _____ ______. For American people, they remember what they were doing ____ April 4, 1968. On that day, Dr. Martin Luther King ______ _______. Robert Allen is now _____ 50, but he was a school pupil ____ _____ _____.

He heard the news _____ ____ _____ when they were eating dinner. After that, they just finished dinner ____ _________. On ___________ 11, 2001, the World Trade Center ____ ______ ______ by _________. Kate Smith will never forget this event. She was ____ scared _____ she could hardly think clearly

after that.

Step 6 Language points 1. What do you think the passage is about?

passage

n.

章节，段落

passage 作“(文章的)段落”解时, 不限于文章的一个自然段, 也可以由若干句

话或若干个

paragraphs 组成。

passage 也可作“一段, 一节”解, 一般指讲话、文章或乐曲的一部分。

2. My parents were completely shocked!

completely adv. 彻底地，完全地

shocked

adj. 惊愕的；受震惊的

3. My parents did not talk after that, and we finished the rest of our dinner in silence.

in silence 沉默，无声

without speaking or making a sound;

silently

许多病人在静静地等候着。

A hundred and fifty reporters sat in silence.

在场的150名记者静静地坐在那里。

4. … most Americans remember what they were doing when the World Trade Center

in New York was taken down by terrorists.

此句中was taken down是被动语态。意思是“被摧毁”。其中take down表示将建筑物或高的物体“拆除；拆掉；拆卸”，此处根据上下文可翻译成“摧毁；毁掉”。如: They’re talking about how to take that wall down.

他们在讨论如何拆除那堵墙。

5. She remembers working in her office near the two towers.

1) towers在句子中指的是世贸中心的双子塔。

2) remember doing something 表示“记得曾经做过某事” ;

remember to do sth. 表示“记得要去做某事”。

6. I didn’t believe him at first.

at first “起初，首先”，作为介词短语，只起副词作用（在句中用作状语）。

at firs 主要用于强调前后对照，暗示接下去的动作与前面的动作不同甚至相反，因此

常有

but, afterwards, soon, at last 等相呼应。

Step 7 Speaking 2e

How much do you remember about the events in the passage? Test your partner. A: When did Dr. Martin Luther King die? B: He died on …

Step 8 Summary

by the side of the road 在马路边

walk by 走过；路过 in history 史上

make one’s way

前往；费力地前进

hear the news 听到这个消息

for example 例如 tell the truth 说实话

the rest of ... 剩余的……

in silence 沉默；无声 point out 指出

take down 拆除；往下拽；记录

look out of the window 看窗外

so … that

如此......以致

Step 9 Homework

1. Remember the words and phrases in this lesson. 2. Finish the exercises in the workbook.

Section B 2 (3a – Self check) Step 1 Free talk Look at the picture and talk about what they were doing when the plane hit the

World Trade Center. Step 2 Writing 3a Make notes about an event you remember well.

What was the event? When did it happen? Where did it happen? What were you doing? What were your friends doing? Why was it important?

Why do you remember this event? 3b Write a short article about the important event in 3a. Try to write three paragraphs. First, write about the event (when and Then, write about why this event was where it happened).

important. Next, write about what you and some of

your friends were doing when this event When this event happened, I was happened. ____________. My friends were

An important event that I remember well

was _____________________. It _________________. This event is very happened in/on _____________ at /in important to me because _____________. /I __________________. remember this event well because When I heard the news of this event/ _________________. Sample writing An important event that I remember well was Wenchuan Earthquake. It happened on May 12, 2008 in Wenchuan, Sichuan. When I heard the news of this event, I was working. My friends were watching games on TV. This event is very important to me because many people died in the earthquake. They need some help. Lots of people came to help them. Step 3 单元复习

过去进行时

1. 概念: 表示过去某个时刻或过去一段时间正在进行的动作。

2. 句子结构: 主语

+ was/were + doing sth. + 时间状语

3. 时间状语词: at 5:00 yesterday afternoon, at that time, then 等连用, 或者用另一动作来表示过去的时间。如：

They were playing basketball when she arrived. While they were playing basketball, she arrived. 过去进行时与一般过去时的区别

过去进行时着重描述当时正在持续进行的动作，它的特点是：暂时，持续和未完成，强调过程；一般过去时表示发生过的动作或存在的状态，即表示动作发生过，而且已经结束了，强调结果。

1) Shirley ______ a book about China last year but I don’t know whether she had finished it．

D

A. has written

B. wrote

C. had written

D. was writing

2) Mary ____ a dress when she cut her finger. C

A. made

B. is making

C. was making

D. makes

was making 表示正在做衣服的过程，如用made 则表示这一动作已结束，做衣服的动作已结束与

cut her finger就没有联系。

3) He _______ (write) a letter, then went to bed. wrote wrote 表示动作已结束，做另一件事，如用was writing 就与

went to bed 在逻辑上相矛盾。

过去进行时侧重表示动作延长的时间长度; 一般过去时表示过去某时发生过某事，侧重说明事实。

He ___________ all night last night. was writing （他一直写……）

He ________ something last night．

wrote （说明他写了……的事实）

注：下列几类动词通常不用过去进行时。

①

表示状态的动词

be；

②

感官动词：feel, hear, see, smell, taste等;

③

表示思维或心理状态的动词：believe (认为), forget, consider, know, remember, hope, wish, want 等；

④

表示所属关系的动词：belong, have, own, hold (容纳)等。

when, while 区别：

1. 由when引导的时间状语从句，主句用过去进行时，从句应用一般过去时；

由while引导的时间状语从句，主句用一般过去时，从句应用过去进行时。

When the teacher came in, we were talking.

当此句改变主从句的位置时，则为：

While we were talking, the teacher came in.

2. 如果从句和主句的动作同时发生，两句都用过去进行时的时候，多用while引导。如：

They were singing while we were dancing.

Step 4 重点短语

1. 感觉像

6. 醒来

2. 首先

7. 凌乱

3. 入睡

8. 清洁

4. 逐渐变弱

9. 互相帮助

5. 确信

10. 在困难时期

重点句子

1. What were you doing at eight last night?

I was taking a shower. 2. He was reading in the library when the rainstorm came. 3. While Linda was sleeping, Jenny was helping Mary with her homework. Step 5 Self Check 1. Fill in the blanks with when or while. 1. _____ I was walking home from school, I saw a strange light in the sky. But _____ I pointed it out to my friend, it went away. 2. ______ I told my older brother about the strange light in the sky, he just laughed and didn’t believe me. 3. ______ my brother was laughing, the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well. 2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets. When I ____ (be) in the sixth grade, I ______ (join) a piano competition. I ________ (practice) for four hours every day and my piano teacher _____ (come) three times a week to _____ (help) me. Then the big day finally _______ (arrive). I ____ (be) so nervous when they _____ (call) my name. I _____ (go) up and _______ (start) to play. While I ___________ (play), everyone ____ (sit) still and listened. I played the song without any mistakes. Then I ______ (wait) for them to call out the winner. When I ______ (hear) my name, my heart ____ (beat) so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. I couldn’t believe it. I ____ (win)! It ____ (be) the happiest day of my life! Step 6 Homework

某英语论坛发起了一个主题为“自己曾做过的一件好事”的讨论。请你将自己曾做过的一件好事写出来，发表在该论坛里，与大家一起分享。不少于80词，可适当发挥。

该写作任务要求用英语写一件过去发生的事情，即要求写一篇记叙文。写作时要注意记叙文

的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件起因、经过和结果。可以采用正叙、倒叙或插叙的方式来写。因为事情发生在过去，所以文章宜用一般过去时或过去进行时。

文章的整体结构可如下：

引出文章话题→Here is something ... 交代事情的具体经过→It was a sunny afternoon. I was ... 收尾，浅谈感悟→On that day, we went back home late, but ...