Section B 3a —4 Self check教学设计

话题复习和写作教学设计

宁远二中

唐文

教学目标：

1.根据本单元学过的词汇和短语，会写关于如何保持健康的短文。

2.学会培养良好的生活习惯。

教学重难点：学生根据题目要求，按照写作步骤和技巧写出符合要求地作文。

教学步骤：

Step1：warming up& lead-in Step2: writing skills (作文六步法)

1.

审题

确定基本要素:5W1H (何

时

何

地

何

人

为，何

如

何

做

了

何

事)

2.

抓要点 确定主要行为(What happened?)

3.

扩展成句

形成基本语句(Who did what?)

4.

连句成文

时间

空间

细节

连贯

呼应

5.查错改错

要尽量剔除错误

6.抄写

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查错改错

(卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面不整洁一定会扣分！)

Step 3: writing practice 请用六步法写一篇短文。

Tips（小贴士）：

１．仔细研读汉语及英文提示词，千万不要漏项。

２．列出可能用到的句型，注意关联词的使用如：in order to, and, but, because, 等。

３．语法方面：时态，人称的准确使用。

４．形成整个文段，想好“开头，中间，结尾”（发表议论，谈感受）。５．适当分段。

６．写完后要通读检查。

健康对于任何人来说都是重要的。春风学校除了早操和阳光大课间外，孙校长还特别强调每一个学生必须每天喝两杯开水来保持健康。为了保持健康，我们应该注意什么呢？根据表格提示写一篇不少于80词的短文。

words：

first，

second，

finally，in a word 1.have a have more healthy food healthy eating and drink habit

2.take exercise

get enough sleep play basketball take a walk

have less unhealthy food and drink

run swim 3.relax ourselves

listen to watch TV music do some sports talk to others

Step4 :show time 学生习作当堂展示

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Step 5:Summary (作文六步法)

范文展示：

How to keep healthy

Health is important for us. So we need to know how to keep healthy.

First, having a healthy eating habit is important.We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables. Because they are

good for our health. Eating little meat and drinking more milk are good for

us, too. Don’t eat junk food

.Second，taking exercise is helpful. Regular exercise can help build us up. We can play basketball, take a walk, run or swim. Finally，relaxing ourselves is necessary. We should sleep for about 8 hours at night, and never work too hard. What’s more，

we can relax ourselves by listening to some music，watching TV, doing sports or talking to others.

In a word, keep healthy and we can study better，work better and live a happier life.

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